| 2007-08-01 01:57:10 |
Our First Threesome_(0)
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Absolutely drab. Not exciting at all- too routine. |
| 2007-07-30 10:09:57 |
Cafe L'Amour
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Great humor, but the dialogue was kind of lame to be honest. Sex scenes weren't particularly fantastic, but I'm confident you'll get better (assuming there is a sequel?) |
| 2007-07-30 10:50:11 |
Cafe L'Amour
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hmmm sounds like a hot three way is in chapter 2 ??? |
| 2007-07-30 11:41:34 |
Cafe L'Amour
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make the sex scenes a little longer with more detail. other than that great job. can't wait for chapter 2. |
| 2007-07-30 13:37:59 |
Cafe L'Amour
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not bad, more detail and easier transitions from each characters scene. also stop stealing lines from dane cook, other than that bravo |