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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-31 22:06:46 | Cafe L'Amour | yeah sex scene was short and choppy. try to put alot more detail and length in that. the comedy was good but try to come out with your own material and not off dane cook. witch i think is on sum good shit. keep wrighting and the next chapter has many possobilities. really ill give it a 7 |
| 2007-07-31 23:56:52 | Cafe L'Amour | Ah, terribly sorry about the Dane Cook bit. When I was writing it, I didn't even think about that. It just kinda popped into my head. I totally forgot it was Dane Cook's. Sorry again. |
| 2007-07-30 09:18:45 | house...... de..... la ....sex | No rating, poorly written. |
| 2007-07-30 11:01:54 | house...... de..... la ....sex | what language are you writing in ?? 2/10 |
| 2007-07-30 11:02:31 | house...... de..... la ....sex | fail /wrists |