| 2007-08-16 18:14:30 |
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Good story but get todd back
and make the story better for todd
poor guy shud at least have a better ending
9!
keep writin...but with more balance |
| 2007-08-20 02:15:19 |
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it was decent very enticing @ times but a bit drawn out |
| 2007-08-22 02:53:09 |
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"diu lei ah"!!!!d startin wuz ok but afte dat it wuz lyk soooo fuckin B-O-R-I-N-G!!! i tink u deserve a 6.datz all.....in d future dont make d story long,juz make it short n hot!!! |
| 2007-08-23 23:08:04 |
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Does anyone know why that last message was like that? Is that some sort of translation? Because I've seen that before |
| 2007-08-25 07:30:43 |
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too long. nuff said. |