| 2007-09-14 00:25:15 |
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BORING and long |
| 2007-10-01 04:12:27 |
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to long, cut out most of it, especially the part when she makes them sit at the table talking about it, makes no sense. |
| 2007-10-11 10:28:45 |
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it was too long. got boring first ten paragraphs. |
| 2007-11-21 08:15:38 |
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good good :) todd got picked on a little though.. |
| 2008-01-22 19:55:36 |
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It was a nice story but i think it would have been better if it had simply ended after the wedding. |