| 2007-12-19 19:57:40 |
My daughter has grown up
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da,m i had no idea plaguerism made u a fag,i thought u had to suck a dick or something, |
| 2008-01-18 03:56:07 |
My daughter has grown up
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ur a fag u dont copy a story on the same site u fukin idiot stupid fucker |
| 2007-08-06 06:53:20 |
FIRST EXAM_(1)
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wow thats all i can say right now |
| 2007-08-06 07:33:22 |
FIRST EXAM_(1)
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Many misspelled words and quite a few grammatical errors. I would strongly having your work proof-read by a qualified proof-reader before you attempt to publish again. You have an interesting story line, but YOU need to work on your spelling and grammar. |
| 2007-08-06 16:56:55 |
FIRST EXAM_(1)
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Couldn't read what seemed like it would have been a good story because of all the !!!!! and typos. I agree you should have someone proof read. |