| 2007-08-12 13:56:18 |
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wow, this story was terrible. i didn't even read past the first paragraph because of all the !!!! and ?!?! and other shit. go back to school, and learn how to write. |
| 2007-08-13 00:33:27 |
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I thought the story was good regardless of all the mistakes. hey and before you preach to someone else about misspelled words and bad grammar, you should really watch how you're righting your comments |
| 2007-08-13 09:25:07 |
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THIS STORY IS THE SHITTIEST STORY I'VE EVER READ IN MY LIFE! |
| 2007-08-13 22:18:15 |
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I like pregnant stories but this one is as awful as it is unrealistic. I know it's supposed to be a fantasy, but it's too unbelievable. Poor grammar and spelling. |
| 2007-08-24 18:13:02 |
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