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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-08-07 21:23:24 | Jeanie with the Ginger Smile | When we talk about your style, we mean how you write not your fashion sence. YES,some of the stories found here miss the details. This is the second (the other is a series, "liz'erd", I had not checked if you wrote it too. It is very simular. Did you copy it?) with details and no story. I think you are trying. Very trying. |
| 2007-08-07 22:48:20 | Jeanie with the Ginger Smile | The last time I read shit like that it blew out of a garbage dump, and I put it back.. |
| 2007-08-08 03:19:04 | Jeanie with the Ginger Smile | you would do a favour for mankind if you'll stop writing form now on!!! bigest crap i've ever read... |
| 2007-08-08 05:47:18 | Jeanie with the Ginger Smile | fail. |
| 2007-08-08 08:19:32 | Jeanie with the Ginger Smile | I read one paragraph and that was enough for me. Too many adjectives to describe something. A thong is a thong--Give a color but not the rest of the bullshit. Tried another of your stories and I only read the first paragraph. Those listed as true are not and those listed as fantasy are real fantasies. No rating--I'll be kind to you. |