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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-08-08 13:20:10 | Jeanie with the Ginger Smile | What the Fu_k was that all about?!! I didn't know this was a math class. |
| 2007-08-08 16:30:53 | Jeanie with the Ginger Smile | that was the funniest shit ive ever read i cant stop laughing pllz write more stories |
| 2007-08-08 18:42:12 | Jeanie with the Ginger Smile | This story makes eating shit sound sexy |
| 2007-08-08 23:40:32 | Jeanie with the Ginger Smile | Stop focusing on the clothes. The clothes are just on the body. We don't need to know that it's 100% spandex or whatever. Just say blue, black, green, yellow.... That's all you need. Revise by cutting out the adjectives. They're unneeded. You're readers have an imagination too you know. Let them put they're hottie in So and So's place and imagine what's on underneathe. YOU just need to conscentrate(sp??) on the action. NOT the Description. |
| 2007-08-09 08:25:32 | Jeanie with the Ginger Smile | Fucken shit from a clumzy gay or lesb |