| 2007-08-20 08:52:39 |
Midnight Swim
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I think the rating have been a bit harsh. Good story, though. I can't wait for part 2. Maybe read through the story a couple more times before posting for spelling and grammar. |
| 2007-08-20 10:17:26 |
Midnight Swim
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that was so romantic and im soaked! |
| 2007-08-20 10:19:24 |
Midnight Swim
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Too bad you write like you talk, trashy. Too many uses of S**T makes gutter language of the story. |
| 2007-08-20 11:11:36 |
Midnight Swim
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Its really well written and a really good, natural storyline......yes do read over it a couple of times before posting it...also dont use as much bad laguage, takes away the romance....but other than that, excellant 9/10 |
| 2007-08-20 11:34:51 |
Midnight Swim
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good to see some top Aussie writing - excellent stuff !! you must be missing Aus! :) |