| 2007-09-03 12:49:17 |
How it all started_(1)
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It wasn't that bad ... kinda too young for a 8 years old gal. |
| 2007-09-25 03:18:35 |
How it all started_(1)
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It would be better if the gal is older |
| 2007-09-29 21:58:49 |
How it all started_(1)
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You're right, she should be older. I'll do better next time. |
| 2007-08-30 20:26:04 |
Horny Loving Brother Chapter 9
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I'm really in o these chapters!, but I can' help but miss Dannie's Big brother and sister. I really think it's the three of them and the love between them that really made the story what it is. As soon as Dannie started saying how she wished that she wasn't pregnant so that George may have the chance too knock her up kind of ruined the reason I got so in to the story in the first place!!! Please get back to the brother soon! |
| 2007-09-05 09:55:19 |
Horny Loving Brother Chapter 9
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I agree with the prevous comment on the story the; I too wonder about the fate of ken and mary. As for your paragraf-problem, I ,for one, am not really bothered. However you could use a dubbel enter to leave a clear line at the end of one. It will not be an elegant solution, but we will at least be able to see where one paragraf ends and the next one begins |