| 2007-08-31 01:16:06 |
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nah these kind of stories always end up with a third member or more such as nieces, others aunts, friends, etc. etc. the best thing is to keep it just Kay and Matt. but keep involving the animals. the society taboo of bestiality makes for great reading and it was in this story. other than that, more detail to love making, you end it to quick, both with human and animal lol. good luck hope for the best in chapter three. 8.5/10 |
| 2007-08-31 02:15:07 |
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try hving him fuck a horse....and maybe have him try out his teachings on some neighbor girl....maybe even her mom |
| 2007-09-01 03:01:03 |
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Great stories, would love to see this series go for a long time! |
| 2007-09-30 01:59:15 |
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gotta put more description in the sex scenes and have them HAVE more sex... say maybe with a add on character like maybe a neice or another older woman.. or even his mom him kay and one or two of the animals(like a horse a dog... idk your the writer man so just take our suggestions and you make the descisions and write the story because we wanna read more about taboo beastiality) ;) |
| 2007-10-15 11:07:58 |
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i'd like to read what iKay has next in store. another chapter? very good. |