| 2007-09-02 14:44:50 |
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Uh Oh the grammar police are out again :-( |
| 2007-09-02 15:28:47 |
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was great cummed on maself in the cafe
am going home to masterbate LOL
praying and hoping this happens to me |
| 2007-09-02 18:30:01 |
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Nice story |
| 2007-09-02 22:28:00 |
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"Words do not need the aspstrophy except when need to show possession. your use with "aerolas'"
and "see's" was inappropriate. i quit read at this point. sharpen your grammatical skills before writing another."
You say this and your OWN grammar sucks, how stupid can you be? |
| 2007-09-03 00:13:46 |
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It was a great story, but the beginning was a lil too long and boring, I almost stopped reading it. |