| 2007-09-05 04:37:35 |
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The story moved too fast. You don't go from a quick fingering to a quick fucking with a 12-year old daughter. She would want to play with your cock, see how it hardens, and perhaps want to pump it for a while until it cums. Not much thought went into this story. The content would have been much better if the father went slower and included the above before fucking her. Gave the story a 6/10. |
| 2007-09-09 09:18:17 |
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great - please bring out another one!!! |
| 2007-09-01 15:51:37 |
Adventure in the Playground
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There is no such word as "swang". Proofread your stories or have someone more educated do it for you. |
| 2007-09-01 19:38:46 |
Adventure in the Playground
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There is a word such as swang. It's spelled "s-w-a-n-g". Leasrn to use a dictionary or have someone more educated do it for you. |
| 2007-09-02 01:39:27 |
Adventure in the Playground
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The main character is suck a bitch, he should be happy hes getting any pussy at all |