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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-09-03 19:59:15 | My Mom_(2) | It's not my normal cup of tea but i couldn't stop reading all 7 parts plus your other 6 part story. I am not into Interracial but it sure turned me on. You really should use a spell checker and you should proof read it too the following day. However as I said I like the way you tell a story. |
| 2007-09-03 21:00:16 | My Mom_(2) | I think this is a very gd story, although lacks a bit in detail and grammar. Maybe a little longer too next time? Good work, looking forward to the sequel! |
| 2007-09-04 08:41:18 | My Mom_(2) | the only ones i really pay attention to are oneswho say something constructive or put thier names beside the comment. any one can say something if they are unknown |
| 2007-09-04 11:41:51 | My Mom_(2) | not to bad, but not to good either. the story lacked depth, normally you write more detial an longer stories in this series. not to mention the title, her mom was not even in the story. please length the next one an add more detail to it. your a good story teller, but i agree with others spell check honey, lord knows we all need that little device! keep up the great story telling. an please do write more. |
| 2007-09-05 16:10:44 | My Mom_(2) | no. we want no more, save your time. |