| 2007-11-23 16:14:12 |
The Surviving Twin Part 1
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i prefer them going slower |
| 2007-09-09 09:53:28 |
jared's party's
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what do you get when you cross a retard and a keyboard?(JARED'S PARTY'S) |
| 2007-09-15 00:41:45 |
jared's party's
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It may have been a good story but was ruined by lack of proper grammar, punctuation and spelling. Otherwise, it's lousy. |
| 2007-09-17 02:22:33 |
jared's party's
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A good story, however does not observe the proper use of parts of speech, punctuation and phenetics. Please observe.. you will be a good writer. |
| 2007-09-28 13:09:32 |
jared's party's
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Pity that we can't give stories like this minus10/10, and that's too much! |