| 2007-09-06 16:41:42 |
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Well, that's one way to make a longer story - just duplicate it. Good story, but cheating like that sucks. |
| 2007-09-06 21:36:32 |
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Terrific story and I'll tell you why. Unlike some of the other authors who occasionally will have a 13-year-old boy fucking like a seasoned porn star, this author knows what happens when a first-timer has sexual contact with a mature woman. He comes instantly. That's the way it is and always will be. Congratulations. 10/10 for a good sexy tale and for telling it like it should be told. |
| 2007-09-11 08:45:46 |
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These two storys were awesome. Please write more about them. |
| 2007-09-29 15:48:36 |
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You are good except for the spelling and the repeating of the story. But I can live with all of the abrove. |
| 2007-11-13 12:02:17 |
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Loved it. Misspell all you like. I read the story for its'
credibility and sensuality and it has both.
Well done. |