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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-02 07:44:37 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | I was thoroughly enjoying it until you described your nipples as a light brown. Black people are such an instant turn-off :-P |
| 2007-10-02 09:48:31 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | Fantastic story, I had no problems with the grammer at all :) |
| 2007-10-02 10:01:44 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | First of all, I would like to compliment you on a fine and well detailed story. I gave it a 9/10 and will be looking for part 2. Secondly, there are quite a few readers on this site that couldn't write a grammatically correct sentence if they had a gun to their head. That said, I must say that while your grammar and spelling were fine, you often left words out that should have been there. I believe that is what the grammar nazis are trying to say even though they have no idea of how to express it. Regardless of the comments, keep up the good work. |
| 2007-10-02 12:01:49 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | nice story |
| 2007-10-02 13:02:43 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | Part 2 is on the way, will submit in a day or two then it's up to xnxx as to when it gets posted. Enough with the grammar bullshit, nobody has given one example of inproper grammer. Try it. I'll be happy to debate and correct your retarded education. If you are American English taught there aren't any grammatical errors, get over it already. American English is the most spoken language on the planet so get fucked you elitest assholes! |