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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-02 20:45:07 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | Grammatical errors abound! Mistake 1: "Or the guy who wants to have one. " (fragment-consider putting it in ( ) as an aside) "A long, detailed story for the girl who wants to be a very high end, expensive whore (or the guy who wants to have one)." Mistake 2 "As a child through high school I was teased about my clothes, shoes, everything other kids had that were nicer". There should be a comma between child and high school. "through high school" is a prepositional phrase and is always separated with a comma, as it is considered "estra info". Mistake 3 "By the time I got to 10th grade at 16 years old I was sick of it." Where to start on this one! Maybe it would have been better had you said "By the time I entered 10th grade, (comma because by is a preposition) to be continued. |
| 2007-10-02 21:34:04 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | Nice story, cant wait for part 2...and to the people who are bitching about grammar...go write your own stories and don't complain... |
| 2007-10-02 21:40:36 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | Propositions are your problem! A phrase is a group of words that lacks either a subject, verb, or both Prepositional Phrase: is made up of a preposition, the object of the preposition (a noun or pronoun) and any modifiers of the object. A prepositional phrase adds more information for the reader about time, place, direction, or manner. Punctuation: A prepositional phrase that introduces a sentence is set off with a comma. “During the summer months, they went swimming.” If the prepositional phrase only adds information to the sentence and does not limit the meaning of the sentence, commas are used. “During the summer months, from June to September, they went swimming.” If the prepositional phrase is short, a comma is not needed. “In August they went swimming.” When the prepositi |
| 2007-10-02 21:55:46 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | Ran out of room! “In August they went swimming.” When the prepositional phrase comes at the end of the sentence there are no commas. “They went swimming during the summer months.” Function: A prepositional phrase can act as either an adjective or an adverb by modifying a specific word. “During the summer months, they swam in the lake of many colors.” “During the summer months” is used as an adverb to modify “swam”. “in the lake” is used as an adverb to modify “swam”. “of many colors” is used as an adjective to modify lake. |
| 2007-10-02 22:10:44 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | Loved the content of the story though! It got me turned on with the visualization! Had you not challenged readers to point out "improper grammar" (that is grammar, not grammer), I would not have responded! "enough with the grammar "bs", nobody has given one example of inproper grammer. try it. I'll be happy to debate and correct your retarded education." I am very proud to be an American and believe that, if you live here, (prepositional phrase separated by comma), you should speak and understand English. I have three degrees and am a middles school English instructor. You may posture and protest all you want, however, your story speaks for itself. |