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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-16 09:49:34 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | Well thank you last reader comment, couldn't have said it better! |
| 2007-10-16 20:12:23 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | Screw Grammar this is the best porn series on the net!!! keep it up |
| 2007-10-16 23:58:00 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | Great story, but you ain't gonna get anywhere by attacking the people who criticize you. If bad grammar didn't distract from the story for at least a few people, nobody would be compiling. Instead of calling your readers assholes, then explaining how supposedly owning an expensive house and 2 nice cars means we can't critique you (posted 10-06-07 - 17:30 by teachme), why don't you simply correct the grammar and shut us all up? Don't you want your story to appeal to the widest audience possible? |
| 2007-10-17 00:16:16 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | Yep no prob, its always a good thing to let those who critise unnecessarily learn to appreciate real talent. by da way its a 10 for the series and i hope a third part is out soon. thx man. |
| 2007-10-17 00:23:42 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | "enough with the grammar bullshit, nobody has given one example of inproper grammer. try it. i'll be happy to debate and correct your retarded education." Challenge accepted. This lady comes over to the rack I was at and says, “oh that would look so good on you.” It surprised me because she wasn’t one of the volunteers that work there. Should be: A lady came over to the rack where I was and said, “Oh, that would look so good on you.” It surprised me because she wasn’t one of the volunteers that work there. Probably not perfect, but a start. |