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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-11-24 09:19:57 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | Certainly an above average story on this site. The few problems with this story were ones of style and diction. Perhaps a careful rewrite is in order. However there is an old saying, the only good writing is rewriting. In terms of style you are 95 per cent there so keep at it. |
| 2008-01-29 19:34:18 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | this story sucks ass big time!! jk (really good shit) |
| 2008-04-11 03:20:23 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 1 | its something she took advantage of her poorness |
| 2007-10-02 16:11:05 | Home Sweet Home | what? |
| 2007-10-03 02:52:15 | Home Sweet Home | bad... |