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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-20 18:29:01 | Missing the bus | the story itself was fine, the sex was fake, you're a virgin. |
| 2007-10-21 05:32:31 | Missing the bus | No new story for you guys. Oh well. Hope you dig my next one. |
| 2007-10-21 12:53:49 | Missing the bus | dammit no second part i really liked this one too |
| 2007-10-21 23:26:51 | Missing the bus | "Shockwaves flew through my body like a truck." Hrmmm. The sex part could use a bit more umph to make it more believable. But I know how hard it is to write that kind of thing. Overall, it was nicely written. |
| 2007-10-28 09:03:52 | Missing the bus | Lovely. I like the metafoes that existed in it. Though some of it could be more pleasing. And the boy meets girl thing. Man.. We all dream of that don't we? Anyway I give it a 9/10 as I like a good passionated love story. Though the last I only give to what I would call the ultimate love story.. Anyway this was a good read. |