| 2007-10-08 10:48:13 |
A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 2, The First Job
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keep up the good work 10/10 |
| 2007-10-08 15:41:28 |
A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 2, The First Job
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are you making a part 3? LOVEN IT |
| 2007-10-08 16:22:25 |
A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 2, The First Job
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Your strong suit is imagery. In a couple of places the writing could use some improvement, but we're not here for literature.Good job! |
| 2007-10-08 17:19:07 |
A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 2, The First Job
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Strong exciting theme, but follows part 1 too closely. Hopefully future chapters will have different action and dynamics. |
| 2007-10-08 20:08:06 |
A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 2, The First Job
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she took an 8 inck widecock up her ass.damn |