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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-11 20:49:19 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 2, The First Job | good job...pt.3 please and thank you |
| 2007-10-11 23:44:58 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 2, The First Job | really good keep writing i want more |
| 2007-10-13 14:59:31 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 2, The First Job | Gee did someone have intercourse ?? |
| 2007-10-13 15:03:46 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 2, The First Job | Hey buddy. Great story. It had good form and story to it, leading from the first story. It's obvious I'm not the only one saying this, but the ending was a bit rushed, and I did see a few tiny, but hardly noticeable grammatical errors. Great form, story, and grammar helps the effect a lot more than you might think. Good luck with part three! DEAD CONSPIRACY |
| 2007-10-14 10:39:47 | A TEENAGE ESCORT - Pt. 2, The First Job | Thanks for the compliment, but it is hey girlie btw. and you're right, i tend to get rushed in the ending and will work on that in pt.3, again thanks for all the compliments. |