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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-11 21:03:09 | Asian Sleepover | thought the story had potential. Hot little asian women, nottoo much can beat that. Keep trying, just proff read. |
| 2007-10-11 21:07:50 | Asian Sleepover | "oh you love my cock dont you, you organism whore" LOL |
| 2007-10-12 00:20:56 | Asian Sleepover | the use of a spell check would make it look as if an adult wrote the story, try to remember the person name that your writing about. Did John die and Daniel take his place... |
| 2007-10-12 09:58:10 | Asian Sleepover | Okay now readers are making sense instead of the writer. yep truthfully im also underaged but im on a porn site, but so what. dont u all think that the forbidden fruits are more desirable? but seriously to a teen who's bout my age, give him some credit. at least he is couragous enough to post this to try and please us. so i feel no appraisal is needed. 6/10 with room for improvement. |
| 2007-10-12 20:09:04 | Asian Sleepover | Give him a break. :/ There are worse stories on this site. |