| 2008-04-02 01:08:28 |
FORBIDDEN FRUIT (2)
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wow.good story. made my horny just thinking about it! |
| 2007-10-10 06:50:05 |
Daughter-in-Law wants a baby - Part 2
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Simply superb. my vote was a ten. |
| 2007-10-10 09:23:36 |
Daughter-in-Law wants a baby - Part 2
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A good effort with just a few grammatical errors. Try proofreading a bit more and your writing will be superb!!! (I don't do this often) 10/10 |
| 2007-10-10 15:06:43 |
Daughter-in-Law wants a baby - Part 2
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10/10 |
| 2007-10-10 23:37:09 |
Daughter-in-Law wants a baby - Part 2
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Loved the story. Hope you continue with it. There were some errors but nothing too serious. You are very talented. I would love to know who the babies really belong to. |