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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-12 08:52:48 | Mom_(1) | Man this was really horrendous, no shit. either u improve or dont rite. for one paragraph ur writing if not it is an anti-climax and turn off to readers.for two there was too much added and nuisance details in those brackets. mostly it was the diolouge, it was inane blabbering. 4/10, no appraisal, learn to be more professional. |
| 2007-10-12 13:24:32 | Mom_(1) | What the fuck are you trying to do? Kill the stories group. You need to invest in an editor...a proofreader and some english classes....that or don't write anymore. |
| 2007-10-12 15:49:44 | Mom_(1) | Were you whacking off while you wrote this? |
| 2007-11-23 21:09:59 | Mom_(1) | shit thats what this is |
| 2007-12-10 02:36:24 | Mom_(1) | In a word, "UNREADABLE." |