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Date Story title Comment
2008-04-08 17:09:21 Mom_(1) Terrible Terrible the shits
2007-10-11 07:42:15 MOM AND JR This is the worst story I ever tried to read.
2007-10-11 07:45:24 MOM AND JR what kind of shit is this?

try:
1) paragraphs
and 2) try putting, 'said greg' or whoever, at the end of speech, rather than some fuckin stupid bracketing thing that makes yuo have to back to the top to work out who the hell is talking
2007-10-11 08:28:43 MOM AND JR couldn't even finish it. bad structure and boring. gave you a 1 for trying
2007-10-11 10:00:45 MOM AND JR Damn what is this crap ..
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