| 2007-10-23 22:05:01 |
Friend's Family
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fucking asshole go fuck matt in the ass you whimp |
| 2007-10-25 17:20:30 |
Friend's Family
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I don't think your eighteen, you sound like a fourteen year old with an imagination. Things like this story just don't happen in real life.The story if properly laid out could have been much better 5/10 |
| 2007-10-15 06:52:07 |
She - 3rd person
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Woah, that was breath-takingly erotic. I have to hand u the honour of having the skills and mastery of a talented writer. the way u let go of ur inhibitions to just write freely is simply fabulous. great sense of lust and passion with a touch of knowing how to be provocative. ces't magnifique. 10/10 |
| 2007-10-15 10:06:10 |
She - 3rd person
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Excellent start. I hope you continue the story line. Thank you for not letting ur (your) inhibitions get in the way! LOL You also got a 10/10 from me. |
| 2007-10-16 01:36:04 |
She - 3rd person
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Don't stop there! |