| 2007-10-26 16:57:49 |
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The story was great, but you need to re-read it before submitting to this forum. You kept leaving out words, Making a reader stop to fill in. gave you and 8 but could have been a 10 if you had edited it. |
| 2007-10-27 07:49:10 |
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good story put 9inch what eva itz prob onli 2 |
| 2007-10-27 17:48:22 |
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That is alovely story. I got very turned on. It reminded me when my son caught me masturbating once. He once did put his fingers inside me after a drunken party at the house. We did not dare go further, as we were scared my daughters may have over heard us. |
| 2007-10-28 17:39:01 |
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If this is a true story then I'm a man with a 14-inch dick --- and I know I don't have one half that size. Either way, this is a great, sexy, red-hot story. 10/10 |
| 2007-10-29 20:20:27 |
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"My pussy is wet" is not a comment concerning the story. Why don't you fucking people write comments that relate to the story. This story has good content but was probably written by someone who didn't have a good education or was simply not interested in what was being taught in their English class. It was boring as hell, but I did pass it. Gave this story a 9. |