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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-11-11 00:33:47 | Hot Springs Eternal | Yes, the story was very hot, but you went straight to the sex with little to no build-up of sexual tension first. Spoon feed us with eroticism, not quick, in-your-face sex. siblings having sex for the first time takes some build-up in real life. it doesn't just happen immediately like this. 6/10. |
| 2007-11-11 16:26:55 | Hot Springs Eternal | I believe the comments are more fun to read than the actual story (which is just so-so). I mean, a good many of the comments appear to have been written by second-graders, not adults. Look how one guy spelled apostrophe. Then how about this comment: "Aryt. apart 4m tha hole anal sex part- its justa total turn off. neway gdgd al round." What the fuck was that all about? And how about the guy who wrote "fagit." Guess he meant faggot, or maybe fuck it. Very entertaining, I must say. |
| 2007-11-13 17:46:47 | Hot Springs Eternal | Caaaaabaaaaaaba baaaaaaa baa baa e ed njjgp / WTJA DDMW /T QT |
| 2007-11-14 21:42:54 | Hot Springs Eternal | to 10/31/07 19:34 that was fucking hilarious and to the writer, that was pretty damn good 9/10 |
| 2007-11-15 01:36:38 | Hot Springs Eternal | very good i like it but yet again, you don just get strait to the sex you have to have sexual tention first and build up into the sex, als like your trying to earn it 9/10 |