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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-04-14 13:30:40 | wolves in forest part 3 | Ty for the storie and i niticed your bringing in a new character sweet One question will you let her join your pack or will you branch off another story staring her, letting her go though what the first went though? |
| 2007-10-19 09:09:59 | Inside Me: C04 | cum on make hib bang her hard and get her pregnant. then bang mom to help her out |
| 2007-10-19 13:58:15 | Inside Me: C04 | Dead Dad: an important change in family structure, the reactions (naturally) will be peculiar to the characters. Here, the immediate reactions seem symptomatic of unseen internals--which, I assume,is your plan. Ean's a little dark, fearful and needy for my tastes, but his darkness is not out of place and the fear and neediness must be dealt with somehow, even if I find that operation kinda creepy. Nice choreography, and let me say again that I like the language of your dialogues . You must xpect irritated commentary from 'consumer whackers,' who won't be entirely pleased by a ritualistic masturbatory sequence, but you need not consider rewriting the chapter to have Ean demand that Maeghan masturbate by, say, squatting over a butternut squash. That would be hot, though. bulksfpmuks |
| 2007-10-19 13:59:45 | Inside Me: C04 | Above poster is an idiot. Good story. |
| 2007-10-19 18:30:14 | Inside Me: C04 | stupid, way too little sex for a "sex story" |