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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-12-18 06:48:27 | Passion forbidden | That was quite excellent. |
| 2007-12-18 13:31:52 | Passion forbidden | fuck anyone who didn't like this story i have never read anything as beautiful as that |
| 2007-12-18 19:24:21 | Passion forbidden | holey shit! where the 11/10 button? nice work, no incest or anything its awesome |
| 2007-12-20 06:18:05 | Passion forbidden | I haven't read the entire story yet but I simply have to say that the constant parentheses and comments detract from the story. You are trying to tell a story, and it distracts all the audience and detracts from the feelings your trying to convey if you ramble on tangent after tangent. If you were to drop these parenthetical comments, I believe it would be a much better story. |
| 2007-12-20 17:50:04 | Passion forbidden | Man, that was beutiful I'm so saddened at your loss May you be together again one day. A friend |