| 2007-12-22 01:16:50 |
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Dude, kudos to you for getting through it and posting this!! I too know what its like to love someone and lose them for stupid things. ROCK ON!! |
| 2007-12-22 02:36:47 |
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Could not give this fine story a 10/10 because of the long buildup, but do give it a 9/10. Very natural and quite believable. See youo do not need incest in a story to make it interesting. A truly romantic tale with a quite sad ending. |
| 2007-12-23 00:52:56 |
Passion forbidden
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stories on this sit NEVER make me feel any kind of emotion, but you my friend have suceeded on writing the first story from this site to ever make me feel any kind of emotion. |
| 2007-12-23 05:02:51 |
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Wow that was amazing, I cried.. |
| 2007-12-23 21:55:20 |
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Great story, was deeply moved by your love for kim and i too know the pain of losing someone you love. Who ever called you a racist son of a bitch and said that crap is an asshole, and karma will get to that person. Good work 10/10 |