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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-11-03 20:59:42 | The Corset | While you are quite prolific, many of your stories have the same shortcoming (in my mind) in that you simply state some sex act has happened with very little description. "I got a blowjob" "We had sex." Could probably do with a little expansion on those types of things. Not to detract, just my two cents. |
| 2007-11-03 22:14:23 | The Corset | Very good, although I agree that you could use a little more description. I rated 8/10. |
| 2007-11-03 23:01:09 | The Corset | I hear you...more detailed descriptions. It's just that sometimes I can't seem to come up an original way to undress the women or make love to them and I really try not to use the same descriptions over and over again but of course I do. A lot of times it seems just fine to say that they had sex in the story. Yes I seem to write more romantically than porn. I don't do well with violence either. Actually I would like to see other people submit more stories so that I have a better variety to read myself. |
| 2007-11-04 01:32:52 | The Corset | It was incredable my sister wears a corset annd i have always fantisied about this.... |
| 2007-11-04 20:31:08 | The Corset | With my brother would fuck me and let me suck his cock |