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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-11-25 15:46:19 | The Corset | read some of the better written stories first |
| 2007-11-27 15:48:49 | The Corset | Not believable and sound like it was written by a third grader. No description |
| 2007-11-28 02:40:50 | The Corset | I hate to critcise a well written, imaginitive story, but on a matter of spelling/vocabuary we lose our virginity. Loose means not tight. Lose means to misplace or discard. |
| 2007-11-28 09:57:36 | The Corset | Lose should have been lost but I think that you were smart enough to know that. However it spellchecked. One mistake, not too bad for all of the stories that I have submitted. Bet you find a lot more in most of the other stories that are posted here. |
| 2007-12-02 10:54:51 | The Corset | that was really stupid... too much; then I took of her corset, then the next one, and the next one, and the next one, and the next one. the next day i put it on again on my mother, and on my sister, and the next sister, and the next sister, and so on... i dont really care... no description... AND WHO THE HELL MAKES THEIR DAUGHTERS WEAR A CORSET??? no meaning and not good... start writing again when you are over the age of 8... |