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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-11-06 14:25:17 | Sixth adventure with my daughter. Revised ending | good story, but rather looong!! |
| 2007-11-06 14:29:19 | Sixth adventure with my daughter. Revised ending | Authors last paragraph. If you don't know(and I realise this is fiction) then sir/madam you ARE a MORON. |
| 2007-11-06 19:21:06 | Sixth adventure with my daughter. Revised ending | The ending still sucks. Why not just have the plane blow up while you're at it!?! We want a happy ending! |
| 2007-11-06 19:34:48 | Sixth adventure with my daughter. Revised ending | To the 2nd. comment, Thankyou for understanding the way we wanted the story to end. This is due to a lot of hard work by Lisa and us, to get the right impression across. Mainly that he is obsessed with getting his own back on Lisa, also that in his eyes he has done nothing wrong. We have a lot to thank Lisa for as, she has made sure that we did not lose focus on certain scenarios or character ideas. She will be pleased to see that someone does not see her as a trouble maker..In fact we all owe her a big thankyou, as even though this story series has been hard work, she has made it fun... |
| 2007-11-06 20:23:40 | Sixth adventure with my daughter. Revised ending | To the 3rd comment....This story series was never going to have a happy ending. Mainly because, even though it is fiction, there is always the possibility that incest can cause long term damage to relationships. We have tried to make it as realistic as possible, and that does mean sometimes a happy ending is out of the question...Just look around at how many lives have been ruined by someone thinking that incest is right... |