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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-12-26 16:02:23 | My Sister Ashley chapter 8 | 9 ! Cant wait |
| 2007-12-31 00:21:56 | My Sister Ashley chapter 8 | You as a writer have an incredible talent. You created a series of stories that were undoubtedly entertaining ( even at parts about the theme and not sex ) and yet it had a great plot. I compliment you on creating such a long story and still being able to keep it interesting. I absolutely believe you could make some money from publishing the "My sister ashley" series. I even tried to register to see that you got this message but unfortunately i couldn't. I give a 10 for the first 5 chapters and a 9.5 for the last 3. The only thing i can say you need to work on is you somewhat when off topic introducing "Natalia, Trish, and Sasha" but you enjoyed writing about them so it doesn't matter. Very few punctuation errors. Awesome series with 2 thumbs up!!! Congratulations. |
| 2008-01-01 13:11:24 | My Sister Ashley chapter 8 | Personally I think it ended well and though ashley isn't as active in the story as she was in the first 3 chapters the ending kind of put her back in the spot light and gave her character a well needed return. You have amazing talent and I hope you decide not to stop at 10 chapters because aside from "A boy in babe land" this series is probably the best I've ever read. Tim needs to get his ass kicked (Sucessfully) by ashley more often that's the only thing that's gone down in the story since the early chapters but you did in a way replace ashley with Natalia and Tish but I think all of us want to see Ashley return as the dominant character and tim to fail at fighting back once in a while. I can't really complain I'm addicted to this series and I can't wait for chapter 9. |
| 2008-01-07 10:52:20 | My Sister Ashley chapter 8 | God damn i love these stories, please dont stop. i come to this site everyday just to look for Ch. 9 of this story... 100% support!! |
| 2008-01-07 23:40:14 | My Sister Ashley chapter 8 | Holy fucking shit this is onme of the best stories i have ever read and believe me, i have read a shitload of stories! if you don't continue this im going to kill myself. and then you would have to live with the fact that it was your fault that someone died. so in conclusion, you should continue this story! keep it up! |