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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-11-28 17:38:46 | Ben 10 and the New Alien chapter 2 | It had some ups and downs..but I would say keep writeing man. though, try to think on a kid level if your going to talk from a kid's perspective...it dosen't even sound like the actual cartoon character's. |
| 2007-11-28 20:34:49 | Ben 10 and the New Alien chapter 2 | nice work man. keep up the good work |
| 2007-11-28 23:02:42 | Ben 10 and the New Alien chapter 2 | waiting for the next part.It was really a nice one. |
| 2007-11-29 03:09:32 | Ben 10 and the New Alien chapter 2 | these are children! youre sick dude. real fucking sick. get a life you fucking perv....and a real woman, not a little girl. |
| 2007-11-29 10:19:02 | Ben 10 and the New Alien chapter 2 | to long if you dont mind my saying -.- |