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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-11-28 09:52:05 | Inside Me: C12 | you are a really good writer! Good imagery and plot devices. Keep it up |
| 2007-11-28 09:53:43 | Inside Me: C12 | I Loved It, That Made A Good Ending, And i like the way u worked the Friends In, but not too far, Your a Star, the best Writer On This Website, and most of the others, no-one else makes Such a build up in the story, and then can Also end it so Good, You should Sell These , you'd make a killing with A Grade Storys like that, 10/10 * * * * * |
| 2007-11-28 16:25:17 | Inside Me: C12 | ummm im not so sure about the ending... it seems like there should be another one cause she could get pregnent and bentlee is still in the picture and no words between ean and montana? |
| 2007-11-28 16:42:34 | Inside Me: C12 | boooooo bad ending, why did you put a cliffhanger at the ending thinking she may get pregnant. This is the end of a series, you have to solve all the problems, not introduce new ones... other than that it was alrite... |
| 2007-11-28 17:55:04 | Inside Me: C12 | I've read the series and loved it but you should make more like others said it's a cliffhanger, bentlee's still there and nothing really happened between montana and ean. |