| 2007-12-16 00:40:12 |
Jayna the Genie
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This was good atleast from my opinion. Im not sure many others liked it as much as i did, but keep up the good work |
| 2007-12-16 06:20:50 |
Jayna the Genie
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mm nice and original. |
| 2007-12-16 18:19:41 |
Jayna the Genie
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Great story, but small improvement suggestions to your future works if you don't mind? This one had great potential for a longer story. Maybe the release of the genie was too early? And you rush the sex scenes. Use the tabulator button to make them more readable. |
| 2007-12-16 18:46:26 |
Jayna the Genie
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Super! Cam't wait for part 2! |
| 2007-12-16 19:44:36 |
Jayna the Genie
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That story was the bomb!!! I loved it!!! keep it up man!!! Your a talented person |