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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-12-21 14:04:10 | Jayna the Genie | AMAZING Story, I FUCKIN' Loved it!! Part 2 should be fantastic! |
| 2007-12-21 23:35:38 | Jayna the Genie | Good story, a little to fictional for me but I really liked it! |
| 2007-12-22 00:39:03 | Jayna the Genie | holy shit that was good story |
| 2007-12-22 09:27:04 | Jayna the Genie | Cool story, man. Unlike some readers, I like the drama in the story, so, bah to the rest of them. But, on top of that, you should have the second one with a plot twist. Maybe his friend that knows about the genie tries to steal her? It's up to you how you put a plot twist in here, but, either way, it should be a good story. GOod on ya.. Genuineeastwood |
| 2007-12-22 17:50:32 | Jayna the Genie | Great story, a little longer than I like but you had me till the end. Part two will be great if this is any indecation. trackbum hit gas, turn left |