| 2007-12-27 00:07:40 |
Jayna the Genie
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truly outstanding and original story. I am very impressed with the complexity of the character depth and storyline, and whether or no there is a part two, know that this was one of the best stories I have ever read. |
| 2007-12-27 03:18:55 |
Jayna the Genie
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It was a cool story. Very fictional though. But it got me wet. I like stories with very juicy lines and I like them to make my cunt slopping wet! |
| 2007-12-27 10:04:26 |
Jayna the Genie
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it was a bit cheesy and shallow in some areas but altogether decent. 9/10 |
| 2007-12-27 17:56:18 |
Jayna the Genie
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Very well written.. am definately looking forward to a part 2. |
| 2007-12-28 01:23:21 |
Jayna the Genie
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*sigh* ^_^ i love a good romance story. this was amazing ^^ 10/10 |