| 2007-12-19 02:27:42 |
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vary well written i like it |
| 2007-12-19 02:55:57 |
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I think u just needed sum pusy cuz u werent gettn enough of ur wifes haha. It wud b a good story if it was nt ur daughter like how can an 8yr old turn u on?? Ew |
| 2007-12-20 13:28:56 |
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u fucking pedophile!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... |
| 2007-12-21 02:34:45 |
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really good story, doesnt focus on the age or the situation. its a love story that just happens to involve father and daughter. i love how the char. is so considerate and the fact that there isnt any hints to some ugly fetish. the story may not be normal but it definatly isnt discusting. please cont with further chapters. 10/10 |
| 2007-12-21 04:36:25 |
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really nice story, i liked that one.
keep writing |