| 2007-12-21 05:58:34 |
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Very intriguing. Well written and thought out. 10/10 |
| 2007-12-21 10:03:06 |
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Awesome story. The best i have read so far. How about a second part to continue? |
| 2007-12-22 09:22:29 |
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The story's technicallyok but it's sterile andlacks power.. Where's the PASSION?? |
| 2007-12-24 01:35:42 |
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aah will you critics quit yer bitchin, that story was superb! |
| 2007-12-28 01:53:35 |
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what kind of human being goes for an 18 yr old fuckin pedophile at least wait till shes like 16 or so |