| 2007-12-13 16:09:07 |
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wow you should get a job writing for a chilrens book club. The story is lame---this is a porn site dumbass. Don't bore us with your crying heart bullshit stories. |
| 2007-12-13 16:09:47 |
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am i blind and missing the actual story?
this is the shitest story i have read on here
1/10 |
| 2007-12-13 22:27:01 |
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.....Where is the story? This is without a doubt the most non-sensical piece of shit i have ever read. Actually write something that doesnt make me want to kill myself due to the massive amounts of illiterate gibberish you call a story.
Oh, and its spelled GIRL, not GURL, dumbass. |
| 2007-12-14 01:16:24 |
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very funny write a children book instead |
| 2007-12-14 01:36:00 |
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You small dicked idiot thats the worst story I have ever read, thanks for wasting my time!!!!!!! |