| 2008-01-03 17:17:18 |
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damn near everyone who commented this story has either terrible spelling, grammar, or their logic is flawed. just thought id point that out before i commented this story. it isnt that unbelievable, but i didnt quite understand why there was no one but those few new inmates at this retention facility. overall the story was alright, but it didnt consist of what you claimed, there is no beastiality. all there is is some rape and some dialogue. ill give it a 6 |
| 2008-01-03 17:55:14 |
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This author is a fucking amateur. ... The fucking of a just arrived virgin prisoner and her reaction is totally unbelievable. Who's interested in his other eleven chapters? Not me. |
| 2008-01-06 01:11:34 |
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You should post them here instead!! |
| 2008-01-26 05:19:00 |
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Wow people completely miss the point of a story. I wonder if Lord of the Rings could ever be possible... hmm... anyways. Not bad. Dark as hell. Made me shiver with horror |
| 2008-03-27 04:26:02 |
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Not bad, but it could use some work. Overall, rather believable. I do have to agree that with it having the bestiality tag, it should have included actual bestiality. If people would open their eyes and read the story for what it is, as opposed to something to jerk off to, they'd realize it's actually a very well-written story. Don't let the people who are upset with it merely because it lacked the bestiality aspect deter you from writing and posting future stories as well. 10/10 |