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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-12-25 02:10:57 | Our Week Alone | 8/10 i think it needs alittle more story plot to it,but it was great |
| 2007-12-25 21:57:09 | Our Week Alone | good story, work on proof reading. Some errors. Also last paragraph very long. |
| 2007-12-26 04:55:55 | Our Week Alone | rdfyhfghgjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... |
| 2008-01-07 23:13:28 | Our Week Alone | i have to agree with the other posters; the story is good, but it could be better. Next time try combining the scenes into one story instead of dividing them up like you did. Also, proof read your stories a couple of times before you post them. Other than that, the story was excellent 8/10. |
| 2007-12-24 00:14:53 | How I picked up Jess, part 2 | GREAT part 2 man, keep them coming pleassse 10/10 :) |