| 2007-12-29 01:06:52 |
Ann's nasty new nature
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some things of this story don't make sense.....first you talk about the things that you found sexy about this girl (in 5th grade???), and in the next sentence, you say you can't remember exactly why you found her attractive. Then, you have HER finding you on Facebook. Why would the female character contact you? Wouldn't it make more sense that you would have contacted her, since you were the one who had the attraction?.....some of that doesn't add up...... |