| 2004-06-25 18:14:48 |
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unbelievable, not discriptive, totally sucked, you need a bigger plot then just a guy sleeping. the guy should have teased her. the girl should have gotten the guy alittle more hotter. other they those requirments it rates a 2 out of 10. Write better and get some more imagination. this story didn't even get me semi-erect. |
| 2004-06-28 18:33:14 |
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You kno this waz to me really good but yea you should have licked her pussy first and then fucked but i would give it a 6 out of 10 good job |
| 2004-07-06 12:28:39 |
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it was ok not the best i have read but not the worst but didnt make me blow my load but i do like the teacher thing cuz for some reason all the teachers in my old high school were hot n allways wished it would happen to me |
| 2004-07-17 01:21:29 |
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i think in a girls point of view these people have there heads so up threr assess that they had no thought over this. i liked it and next time do a seq. like in the girls locker room or school swimming pool. good luck with you writing and i'll read you next time. bye. |
| 2004-07-30 19:14:52 |
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it was ok |