| 2004-11-16 19:26:31 |
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A run of the mill story which I am afraid did nothing for me I like a sex story to be erotic and arouse me. Sadly this did not provide that excitement. |
| 2004-12-03 17:20:34 |
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look it almost gave me a bonner but it needs mor descriptive words and longer.....good job ,keep writin. |
| 2004-12-08 00:46:17 |
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Good story,needed to build the fucking up more then have both cumming hard |
| 2004-12-09 13:51:38 |
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this was good but needs more work on the fucking bit |
| 2005-02-02 19:14:29 |
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fucking shite! my pet rat could of written better running over the keyboard!! ur a sad lil queer who sucks cock get a life u fukin jew!! |